Much better. Not great, mind you, but better. LS1 and LS2 need better descriptions, but for now, I'm going with LS1 as your Low Level Switch and LS2 as your High Level Switch.
Based on this, rung 5 should seal itself in once it turns on indicating a full tank until you make LS1. That way you can use B3:0/3 as the start of your dispensing logic. If you do this, be sure to revisit any rung that uses B3:0/3 (I'm looking at you, rung 2...)
Rung 4 simply drives the steam valve, why not get rid of B3:0/2 in the previous rung and drive the output directly in rung 3? Unless it's a requirement made by your instructors, and if that"s the case, it's time to revisit rungs 0 - 2...
Is this supposed to be a continuous process? Or more along the lines of a batch where you fill, mix, and heat the liquids and then dispense them?
Please post the entire program as a RSLogix file and/or post the entire ladder logic as a .pdf. Searching between the various clips is making my head hurt. Owww...
As for your instructors, they remind me of my partner at work, whose instructor told him when he asked for help "That if he didn't already know the answer, he couldn't help him". Nice...